Jason Bonnington, an excellent idea to write a story about Gavin Lang's influence on our driving ranks last weekend but IMO the story you wrote is full of the superfluous babble that also detracts from your TrotsVision performances
https://www.thetrots.com.au/news/the...ing-disciples/
While on the topic, all our Trots presenters have to remember to keep their questions as short as possible (and general so that the interviewee can tell us what they want to tell us) as we are more interested in what the interviewee has to say. Some egs
"Tell us about that race"
"What can you tell us about this horse?"